Do you know, my artsy girl,
What makes a mans face
Worth the remembering?
A woman memorable?
Dazzling?
Curse these hands which have never wrought
Any shape out of fine line and form
Worth the effort of looking,
For how could they ever hope to do justice
To what mine eyes beheld here,
O! Would I render this Beautiful Frame I see
No option but to carve it in truth unwithering,
Using tools granted unto this world
With ink, stone, the earth itself
How I would paint thee until your eyes were more than alive,
(More humanity shown than in human is grown)
And indeed, you stepped, nay, leaped out of the canvas,
Tearing the heart from mortal man.
(And if Im good, woman too)
That I could render your Self, statuesque,
Put Pygmalion, Venus, to shame,
Not just Life and Beauty,
Will fill this homage,
But I shall show the Truth
That lies within the Eye,
And a Soul to honor your own
If I could work in song, hitting upon the minstrels art,
Passion to steal away Reason,
With such music of emotion, none could tell
How your electric sex picked me out
And filled with ink, a wicked fast pen
Would that I were not plagued by this curse,
Desire to show the unshowable
Through words, express the inexpressible
In visions bestowed upon the sight of mind
To try to show beauty with words alone,
Is meaningless and trite,
Not to mention its never won to poets, Rights
To sit and talk and drink in his subject in seclusion
And the fruits of my hand, to bring forth the vision of my mind
Fail, again and again in the task I give,
Whether by paragraph or photograph
Sketch or sculpture, stanza, song
Even as I strive to the thousandth generation,
Still these visions remain locked inside,
Toothless to infect and spread
Too bad I got excited, eh?
Thought it might work,
When I heard that whispered promise
That you had a key.
Only more empty words did you bring
Out of the wellspring, the Inner Me
Do you know, my artista,
What makes a mans face
Worth the remembering?
A woman memorably
Dazzling?














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Reflection broken and shattered, I am many things, many people, I am anything but myself
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The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on.
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"i've never chipped away at someone's sanity before...this makes me rather happy."
i'd sure appreciate your soul.
Which is why I love to watch people as they draw or sketch... and yet also feel a slight anguish at the same time. My psyche is a bit confused on this issue.....
That probably gives you the underlying impetus but as for the specifics I've divorced them from me so I must reflect awhile....
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The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on.
It is a rather annoying thing, either seeing your efforts fall flat on their face and barely even "look pretty" while doing it...
Probably though, one of the deepest rifts/thingies/issues/questions/themes/undercurrents that I just keep coming back to, within my creative self is my jealousy of the visual arts and especially in regards to my brothers who have had much more success there.
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Wherein lies the danger of truly reading... (I guess you could say I use truly in a philosophical/metaphysical sense), because if you let the writer reach inside of you, sometimes they'll tear you apart, but generally, and fortunately too, this only happens when they mean to give you some cathartic release to pull you back together...
But it has always been this nagging thing about my creative self... I can see this very vivid things inside my mind's eye, and yet I cannot truly communicate what I see save through a physical image of some sort.... and I have for some reason never been able to become connected with the visual arts, and indeed, every time I have tried my inherent human motor skills get in my way to the point where it vexes me.
In short I really need to take some dedicated time to take some art courses.
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and thank you.
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