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Electric Sex by ~Coidzy:iconCoidzy:



Rock me baby,
Roll us in the hay,
inside, outside, arms around
You – squeezed tight as
our form is wrapped within the musky,
husky voice of Barry on love,
Sweeping us up in satined velvet,

Silken drapery to make art of lovemaking.
Or was it to make lovemaking into art?

We cannot care, cannot even form questions,
Sentences, words fail us,
Ideas and images devolve
in a crackling blinding whirl

into colors, hot, cool, cold as ice on _______
textures like cherry stained silk-lace,
whirl, churn, burn, yearn
for ecstatic, sensual touches

as we whet ourselves
and drink in eroticism, becoming
more and more insatiable, gorging
faster, faster, more furiously,
desperately as we reach the
Precipice,
The Crescendo and are OH GOD YES!
Away over the void,

White-hot star shoots off the cliff
carrying us beneath,
then the heat cools, light dies

the moment over, all is
the inky, cooling black
Of little deaths and sleeping times
©2007-2009 ~Coidzy
:iconcoidzy:

Author's Comments

The eroticism spawned by My Dearest Artista Chica.

First written on May 14th...

The title is a homage to a band called Electric Six, which you should youtube, especially their song "Danger, High Voltage" ;p

It's also a damn nifty phrase, which is why I'll probably have to kill it sometime soon, drowning your darlings in the cradle and all that jazz....

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:iconwaterneko:
Wow, nice piece of erotica there. Me likey.:)

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"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
-Albert Einstein

"I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul."
-from "Invictus" by William Ernest Henley

"I'm a vampire! I sparkle like a pretty pony princess diamond!" <-Anti-Twilight
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Lol. I love it. And I love Electric Six.
It's awesome.
*comments after 10 years*

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"Well ya know, you guys get it for free. Cuz your my friends. But sometimes strangers come up to me and say 'Oh man! I've seen you around! Can I have one of your glomps? Please?' and I go, 'Sure, 5 bucks'. Cuz ya know, I can't just give them out for free!
:iconcoidzy:
danke, hopefully the flow helped that awesome get to you without it seeming to take too long...

So, what's behind this sudden devAwakening?

PS ->what's your favorite song o' theirs?

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It has some heat to it, eh?

Danke. What's its prime aspect, would you say?

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Fuck, John, you always fucking amaze me.
Damn.

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:blackrose: Let me slip away. :blackrose:

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:iconcoidzy:
Err... I hope in a good way....

...Surprised I call this erotic or something?

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:iconwaterneko:
You really want to know?=p

--
"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
-Albert Einstein

"I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul."
-from "Invictus" by William Ernest Henley

"I'm a vampire! I sparkle like a pretty pony princess diamond!" <-Anti-Twilight
:iconcoidzy:
Would I ask if I didn't? It takes a fair bit to scare me, madame.

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Well, then...

I do believe this poem's prime aspect is the effect it has on me. Its passion, amorous words, etc...gets me rather...riled up>.>

--
"Imagination is more important than knowledge."
-Albert Einstein

"I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul."
-from "Invictus" by William Ernest Henley

"I'm a vampire! I sparkle like a pretty pony princess diamond!" <-Anti-Twilight

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